Two Poems.

So over the past five months I have written some poetry,

take a look at them and hopefully give me some feedback.

Tears were lingering in her eyews threatening to fall from her dark lashes,
Her blood pulses intensely as her boyfriend shouts at her roughly,
He grabs her by the shoulderws and shakes her like a rag doll,
Throwing her down onto the floor, she crys in sarrow,
Holding her legs close to her chest wshe closes her eyes,
Waiting for the police to arrive,
The sirens get louder ad they run down the streets,
Her boyfriend is an abuser and that is no lie,
She drowns in her tears as she holds her legs tight,
The door breaks down, the boyfriend’s in chains,
She looks at the men who took him away,
She thanks them polietly before going to sleep,
But she wakews up the next morning,
Thinking her life is a dream.

The rain drips down my window sill,
Watering the ground below,
Everything is quiet and slow,
It makes me feel all alone,
I think of your face in my mind,
Tears roll down my face,
Why did you go, you don’t care anymore,
Leaving me behind at the door,
I watched you cry and held you close,
When you didn’t know where to go,
My heart is torn, my heart is torn.